My Damsel In Distress: Halimuyak Ng Pagkasabik [Part 01]

Heads up lang sa mga makakabasa nito:

This story isn't written para sa mga paspasang jakulan ang habol. My aim for this story is to give sex, exploration, and fulfilling fantasy na may human touch kahit fiction ito. If you are not into slow updates, kindly scroll past this. This may not be your cup of tea.

Hello, guys. Ero here!

I am thankful sa mga matiyagang naghintay ng slow updates ko sa story na ito. I hope my next steps for this series will still pique your interests and fantasies. Salamat din sa honest feedback and support, mga malilibog!

I've decided to purge My Damsel In Distress: Halimuyak Ng Pagkasabik for now. I'm currently rewriting the first part (which consists of 12 chapters) and currently revamping the story and characters' profiles. Part of this is providing you guys a GDrive for a better mental image of Alie, Max, Lynus, and such. From Alie's choice in coffees and colognes down to how she picks her laundry soaps. Nagbabakasali lang ako na baka kapag naamoy mo eh maalala mo ang characters sa story na ito. Comment ka lang if you want me to send you the link for it.

If you're not into that, it's okay. You can still curate your own image of them in your mind. Di ko babasagin trip mo.

I owe you guys an explanation din siguro bakit I decided to take down the published chapters:

I feel iffy making Alie that young and innocent. It doesn't sit well kahit na pa fiction lang ito. This encouraged me to improve my plot and character build-up.. I've adjusted Alie's age and experience background. I did this to cater iyong request ng isang nag-inbox sa akin.

I kept Max' and Lynus' ages, and their professions would soon be revealed din. I'm still thinking of appropriate careers para sa dalawa na suswak sa kanilang lifestyle and libido intensity. Max' and Lynus' characters will remain intact, kolokoy as ever.

Manage your expectations pa rin sa story na ito. Amateur na feeling writer lang ako and still finding my inks and quirks when it comes to writing. If you're expecting that this would be close to reality, well, hindi po ito confession. The timeline of this story is linear, but it will be indicated kung flashback ba siya or some sort.

My intention of publishing this part is to set expectations and maayos ang name ng series, sans P01 Chap 01 markings. I can publish 1 to 3 chapter updates per week, at least 2000 words per release as much as I can. If hindi, sensya na. Puta ng pera at trabaho 'to eh. Haha!

Sabi nga ng dakilang nansisid sa akin dati,delayed gratification is queen. Expect longer mental foreplay and more exciting chapters (I hope).

Kitakits bukas sa unang bagsak ng edited chapter, mga malilibog!

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Kaunting patakam para sa inyo. Sana matakam ano?

"Magyoyosi lang pala kami saglit, miss. Labas lang kami ha?" paalam ni Max sa dalaga.

Akmang palabas na ng unit ang dalawa nang hatakin si Max ni Alie sa kamay. Napalingon ang binata at napangiti. Napadikit nang bahagya ang braso ng binata sa kalambutan ng dibdib ni Alie.

Bumigat nang bahagya ang pakiramdam ng dalaga… at naramdamang kumikiskis na naman ang kaniyang mga utong sa suot na pang-itaas. Lingid sa kaalaman ni Alie ay napansin ito ng dalawang kolokoy.

"Nakakahiya naman kasi sa'yo, miss, kung uupusan namin itong unit mo," singit ni Lynus na humakbang papalapit sa dalaga. Idinantay niya ang kaniyang kamay sa braso ng dalaga.

"Sure ka ba na puwede kami sa loob?" pangising tanong ni Max.

Napalunok si Alie sabay buntong-hininga at napakagat labi. Hindi niya maipaliwanag ang init ng kaniyang nararamdaman lalo na't parang tumatagos ang titig ng dalawa sa kaniya.

"Dito na lang ho kayo sa loob. Dito lang po ako naninigarilyo, e," pagpapaunlak ni Alie. Napatitig ito sa dalawang guwapong binata sa kaniyang harapan.

Ero