Commute Part 4 (How I imagined it)

Commute Part 4 (How I imagined it)
By Yes Man

Foreword:
I originally posted this story in my website but my account was suspended because of this posting. I guess since it's in English, a non-Filipino reader understood it and complained that it's not for general viewing. My account suspension was only lifted after I deleted this post.

After waiting for so long for the shower scene of the Commute series. I finally read it at another website. Honestly I was kind of disappointed in the way it way written. It lacked details that we usually see in the previous chapter. I got it from betcha_thought_so_too that she was not the one who wrote the shower scene posted in the other website. I don't think that I will ever know the truth and it doesn't really matter. This is the story that started me in writing and I want to dedicate this story to betcha_thought_soo as way of saying thank you.

This is totally my imagination how the shower scene happened. By no means I'm claiming credit for the whole series.

You can read back the first three chapters of the story for continuity.

While waiting for the shower scene from betcha_thought_so_too this is how I imagined what happened.

Commute shower scene how Yes Man imagined it.
Upon entering the bathroom, he immediately took off his sweat soaked t-shirt and unmindfully threw it on the bathroom floor. He went first to the shower area and positioned him-self just below the showerhead as he started turning on the water

This gave me a chance to take good look at this one hell of a lucky guy. He looks more or less 40 years old. His skin was darkened from long exposure from the sun. I can see that he has some bulging in the tummy area but the rest of his body is quite muscular. I can also see cheap tattoo marking on his body. The type you usually see on bums. I can easily picture him living in some filthy slum area.

He already started soaping his body when he turned to me with a wide grin on his fucking ugly face.

"Fuck!!!!" my mined shouted.

My brain is revolting but my pussy felt a slight tingle. As if my pussy knows that sorry excuse for a face gave it the best fuck ever. I immediately felt getting wet down there.

I gave him a mischievous smile as I started to remove my white Climacool jacket. The smile on the guys face broadened as he watch me undress while he continues to soap him self. I slowly undressed my self, giving the guy a short erotic show.

I knew, I game him quite a show as I notice his huge cock hardened by the time I finished undressing and joined him inside the shower area. He immediately started soaping my soft, delicate, teen body.

I thought of what would my friends say if they could just see me now, allowing this ugly stranger have his rough calloused hands exploring my body. I could see their jaw drop in disbelief. I think they would even faint if they would knew that I just got royally fucked by this bugger.

I got out from my mind wondering when I felt his thick finger penetrating my soaped pussy. I can't help myself to hold on to his arms as he plunged his hard knuckled middle finger deep into my hot juicy hole.

"Unngghhh!!!" I can't help myself but make a sound as I stare at him with half opened eyes.

I saw him once again smiled, showing his tartar filled teeth. I am still mesmerized by how yellow his teeth were when he pressed his lips against mine. I immediately returned kiss and pressed my lips onto his filthy mouth.

"Ohhh punyeta bakit ang sarap?!!!" my mind is shouting.

I can feel his left hand mashing my breast while his other hand is busy finger fucking my "oh so hot' pussy.

"mmmmmmm, mmmmmm, mmmmmm" sounds that are coming out from my lips as I continued to engaged the ugly fucker in a torrid kissing match.

"Ohhhhhh, hhhhaaaaaaa" I gasped for air when finally, I freed my lips from his foul mouth.

He turned on the water again to rinse off the soap on our body. After that, we let the water left turned on as he pushed me to one of the bathroom wall.

He pressed his lips onto my neck. It felt so hot when his rough lips traveled down from my neck making his way to my firm breast. He held tight both my boobs, then alternately giving its some hard sucking.

"Unnnngggghhh, Ohhhhh shiittt, ahhhhhhh" He sucked my nipples real hard. Sometimes biting them delicately, giving me a perfect mixture of pleasure and pain.

I was panting when his lips traveled down, giving my perfect slim tummy some tongue rubbing. The sensation was electric, as it shoots all over my body. Finally he made his way to my freshly shaven pussy.

Immediately I felt a sudden surge of aggressiveness when his face came in contact with my hot teen pussy. He ate my pussy like a wild animal given fresh meat to eat. He's literally eating my shaved pussy, sucking all the pussy juice it can offer.

"Ohhhh fuckkkkk!!!!!! Eeiiiiiiii!!!!!!" I shouted as the he spread my legs, giving him more access.

"Sluuurppp!!! Sluuurrppp!!!! sluuurrppp!!!" the sound the guy was making as he suck love juice coming out of my pussy.

It didn't take me long to reach my orgasm. "Oh fuckk!!!! Unnngghhhh!!!!!" I yelled. I held on to his head and buried it further into my hot pussy as I exploded. He sucked and sucked more until I finished my orgasm.

I pulled his neck towards me when he stood up and pressed my lips against his. This is like saying "thank you" for a job well done.

After some crushing lips kissing, I went down on him. His dark skinned cock was throbbing. I grabbed it with one hand then gave its head a good long lick.

"Ahhhgggghhhh" he groaned.

I tasted his pre-cum, which to my surprise tasted sweet. This encouraged me to put his cock head in my mouth.

"Ahhhhhhh, hhhaaaaaa" he moaned as I started sucking his red-hot cock head.

I have done this before but I am no expert in giving head. So I proceeded slowly, careful not to touch his cock with my teeth.

"Ohhh puta, ang sarap nyan!!!" he said when I tried to take more and more of this huge cock into my mouth.

But I can only manage less than half of his cock length. I moved my hand to give him a hand-job as I continued to blow him. I even used my other hand to massage his balls.

But the bastard wants more. He grabbed hold of my head and started to move his hips. My hand holding his cock is restricting is entry. So he took it off his shaft and held again my head and proceeded in fucking my mouth. It was slow at first, letting me take more and more of his cock in every trust.

I held my hand to his thighs as he started to fuck my mouth faster. I can't believe that I was able to hold more than half of his huge cock inside my mouth, as he started forcefully trussed it inside my mouth. I started to gag though as he mouth fucked me even faster.

Thankfully he stopped just when I motioned him to stop. He stood me up and made me face the wall. I bent forward and held on to the wall as I prepared my self for his entry. I put out my butt even more to make sure he got clear view of my pussy hole and not mistakenly go to the other hole.

"Ahhhhhhh!!!!!" I moaned as he suddenly stuffed his huge cock in my waiting pussy. Stretching once again my pussy walls. He wasted no time and he started fucking me from behind. Each thrust more forceful that the other.

"Ohhh!!! ohhhh!!! ohhhh!!! ohhhhh!!!" The bathroom walls were filled with my moans as he fucked the brains out of me.

He mashed and squeezed my butt cheeks as he forcefully fucked my tight teen pussy.

"Plak, plak, plak, plak, plak." The sound that our banging bodies made.

He's fucking me so hard; I knew that my pussy would never be the same again after this rough pounding.

There's a part of me that want to ask him to be "not so rough'. But there's also a part of me that wants to say, "hammer away."

"Ohhh fuck!!!! I'm cumming!!!!! Fuck ahhhhhhh!!!!" I cried out as I reached another orgasm. He's just giving it all to me and relentlessly fucked away.

He gave me a few more hard thrusts before he pulled himself out and turned me around to face him. He pushed my back against the wall and captured my lips again in his lips.

We engaged each other again in one long passionate wet kiss. Our passion seems to transport us in a different dimension. Nothing outside the bathroom walls seems to matter. All that matters is that we release all these built up heat inside us.

Using his left hand, he raise up my right leg. "Owwwwwwww!!!" I moaned out laud as he once again filled my pussy with his big fat cock.

"Ohhh, ohhh, ohhh!!!" I moaned at every forceful thrust he is giving me.

"Umm, umm, umm, umm" He grunts as he hammered me against wall.

"Ohhh fuck, ohhh fuck me!!! Ohhhh!!!" I already lost my wits from this rough fucking.

"Ohhh putang-ina!!! Ang sarap mo!!! putang-ina!!! Umm!!! Umm!!! Umm!!!" His foul words make me even hotter.

I hugged him tighter. He fucked me harder. I buried my fingernails onto his back. He buried his thing deeper into me. We fucked harder. We fucked like there is no tomorrow.

"Ohhh ayan na Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" he shouted as he released his hot spurts of cum inside me.

This triggered my own intense climax. So strong, my body convulsed as I released my orgasm. His hot cum mixed with mine.

It took us some moment to have the strength to move again. When he finally pulled out his cock, our mixed juices came dripping out of my destroyed pussy.

We were so weak we held on to each other as we exited the bathroom. We lay motionless on the bed for quite some time. I need to force myself to make a move and gather my things and fix myself up. I told him that I would go ahead of him and he agreed.

He escorted me to the door. But before I exit the room he pinned me against the wall. He planted his lips against mine. I returned kiss.

"Ohhh, wala na bang katapusan ito" my mind was saying. Truth to be told, at that moment in time, I want to fuck him one more time.

I have to will myself to push him away. He insists that we should do it again. He would not stop until I said yes. We exchange numbers. (I changed my phone number later on.)

Outside the motel, I managed to quickly get a taxi for a ride home. Exhausted, I sat inside the taxi, saying to myself "fuck!!!!"

The End